(It cuts to the beach, Lincoln is in sunglasses and a hat.). I don't expect it to be good, I just felt like doing an alternative ending. (charges towards Lynn in a rage) AND I HATE YOU!!!! Lincoln: Girls! Turning to the siblings, he asked, "When are supposed to leave?" [The softball playoffs. Lucy: (shedding tears) Me too. Rita: Lincoln?! First, she got groans from her children and then Lola said, "What isn't wrong with Aunt Ruth?" I hate the fact that you never take responsibility! "Do you have any idea how guilty you made us feel for possibly ruining your vacation for acting like ourselves?" Why? This whole trip their parents were telling them to behave and they got grounded when they didn't, but now they're learning that they did something to cause them to be kicked out of the hotel after only one day. I can't believe I told him to back away from his own home! "Yeah they did," Luan responded with. Lisa: (beat) Okay, i admit, maybe there were many explanations to resolve such crazy, inane hooey. But I'm not entirelyinnocent myself." Lucy said, as the siblings once again glared at their parents with anger. Felix asked, "Can you tell me what exactly caused these kids to be kicked out?" "Good," Jeffrey said, stepping aside and point to the doorway, "Now get out! I hate boring science lectures! Lola: You mean you dont want to support us anymore? Lincoln grabs 11 squirrel mascots and put them on his parents and sisters, minus Lily.]. Lori finished with. ESPECIALLY THE EXTRA TOE! Lincoln: Im sorry this happened. Rita: How about we all sleep in the living room tonight? "We just wanna tell you how much we HATE YOU, YOU GROSS UGLY THING!" The siblings were heard saying numerous phrases but they all pretty had the same topic, 'What did we do to get kicked out already?' Unfortunately, they were not quick enough and, in a swift moment, the four were launched into the room across the hall, landing in a painful pile on the floor. My disgust for them is almost as strong as Edwin's lust for blood. I can't believe they said they'd tease you for eternity. "And," Lori said, as she approached her parents, "if you want to act like irresponsible teenagers. Lincoln yelled, "WE HATE YOU!" Lori said afterwards, knowing that everyone would've been confused by her talk. IM hoping to show this to Nickelodeon themselves someday. I will not be discarded and than used!! I just hurt Lynn! WE WENT TOO FAR!!! Journal. Ronnie Anne: [Sighs] The softball game she accused Lincoln of being bad lack was on Friday the 13th. She pointed to the back row of seats. After spending a good 10-15 minutes unpacking and putting everything back in the respective places in their rooms, the siblings walked into the living room and saw their parents were in fact still sitting on the couch. It was created for a St. Patrick's Day episode, but flopped hard. A late St. Patrick's Day story for austin2468. I hate that you do nothing but ruin other people's lives, including one of your own! "YOU THINK I ENJOY BEING VISITIED BY YOU LITTLE MONSTERS?! ], Baseball Announcer:[clinging to Pep]"SQUIRRELS WIN! Leni: Linky.(sniffles).please don't do this to us. Lynn Sr.: Son..we never stopped loving you..we do care about you Lori: Don't hurt us like this..we're your familywe want you to be with us. Lana: We didn't mean to ruin your life..(sniffles).we just wanted to avoid bad luck..we're so sorry we went about it all wrong Luna: We get it bro.you were never bad luck..we ruined everything for youthere is no such thing as luckwe'll never live this down.. Lola: You can't hurt your own family like this.. Lincoln: You all hurt me first! Lucy: But..but you wanted us to believe it. They got to Vanzilla and saw their children sitting the car, very mad and upset. *Later in the Duke's room, Lincoln approaches Angus* Angus: Ah Lincoln, What's seems to be on your mind? Lincoln: I hate this! ", Lynn: 'Oh my gosh, you're right. Even more computer typing was heard but soon afterward the woman on the other going, "Hhhmmmm.," was also heard. They kick and punch and claw at each other for several minutes until Lincoln picks Lynn up.). WE WERE NEVER PARENTS!!!! I have truly failed the term 'scientist'. Lincoln: (to the viewers) "Well, looks like everyone learned something. I only told Leni, Luan, Lana, Lola and Lily. And with that the family walked out of the spa, the kids still angry and upset and the parents ashamed and disappointed in themselves. The voice asked. My first story is done. (tears up.). "We don't have a hotel room anymore," Lincoln said, in a very angry tone that the parents weren't used to seeing. Lincoln: (points to the window) "The window. Rita: Kids, your friends are here. Rita got up from her seat and said, "Kids, let me explain" "Explain what?!" All of you!" Are you saying that our parents are responsible getting us kicked out?" We would never force you to go if you don't want to. I hate that fact that you never make up for anything! "YOU HEARD HER!" SQUIRRELS WIN! (Lisa turns to him) Whatever happened to Woman of Science, huh!?! There's a massive storm heading your way." "She's got a million cats that enjoy scratching us like crazy," Lucy said. ], [They pant heavily, before realizing it was all a nightmare. "Nah, Aunt Ruth," Luna said, "you're gonna wanna listen to this." Lynn Sr.: OUR ONLY SON DESPISES US, WE WERE COMPLETE IDIOTS, WE RUINED HIM AND WE DESERVE IT!!!! Lincoln: I dont think I told you I was bad luck. (facepalms. Luna: That was rockin'. SQUIRRELS WIN! I have failed as a human being. "Get in here, now!," the man yelled, scaring the girl and making her run into the room like her butt was on fire. The way the security officer said, 'Right now,' made Luna nervous, it was typically the tone of voice used when someone was in very serious trouble. Goodbye for now. ], Lynn: "Lincoln, you could've tripped and cost us the entire game! Uh-uh, I'm nothaving it. (She storms out of his room and into the hallway. "So you thought that the best way to find a ghost, which I know for a fact aren't haunting this hotel, was to knock out your air conditioner," the man said, as he gestured to the hole that once had an air conditioner there, "Do you realize how ridiculous and stupid you sound right now?" "Get every available hotel staff employee on high alert. I hate it that you don't have any feelings or care anymore! But dont worry, youre still a great writer. ", Lola: "Don't try to fool us! You can never come back. The Loud House No Such Luck Altern. Looking up from the soaking wet floor, the man said, in an unamused tone, "No. Brawl in the family alt ending8. Lori responded with, yelling the last few words. She's smarter than she looks and there's evidence canon in the show to prove it.). ", Rita: (with a broken voice) "We're so sorry Lincoln! Except now I have to deal with the most annoying teasing that's ever existed. Hearing that made the parents sigh in disappointment, they should've known their kids would break things and hoped the bill wouldn't be that much, but also knew that odds were that the bill was going to be massive. But the woman did, "That your parents were caught skinny dipping after hours? Lynn Loud steps up to the plate, but with the luck she's been having today, the Squirrels are looking a whole lot like roadkill. Rita: I guess this is what we get for selling all his stuff. Lynn: NO! And she knew it wasn't about any massive gathering of one group for some kind of event because she would've been notified way ahead of time. Luan added. His sisters join too and put Lynn in her place. "I can't believe you," Luna yelled, "I didn't even do anything yesterday and you still decided to ground me for no reason!" This Fanfic is a MASSIVE critique on every fanfic that is targeting the Episode "No Such Luck" of the Western Animation Series "The Loud House." No Such Luck Alternate ending (Bad) Deviation Actions. Lincoln: I've had enough of this stupid costume! Bad. "AND ONCE AGAIN, I HATE YOU TOO! the goth girl added. Luna spots Lincoln). They started running towards them as fast as possible, when suddenly, the sound of a fist pounding against the door is heard. (She hugs Lincoln again), Lincoln: "Thanks Lynn. ", Lynn: "After how badly I treated you? Okay look, answer me these questions! During the drive, there was nothing but silence, which is very uncommon for a vehicle that is usually occupied by 13 people. Lola: We are your family, we do want you, we promise! His choreography is so dated. They knew their kids wouldn't like that but this was supposed to be a weekend for themselves, not the family, and the kids should've just accepted it and gone to Ruth's. And with that, Lori started driving the van out of the hotel and back towards their house. "So," Lori started with, in an icy tone, "Let's recall what we promised you when you agreed to take us on vacation." What kind of parents would do that? "I know you're headstrong sometimes, but I know that deep down in your heart, you love me. Despite the pain his body was in, Felix grabbed his walkie talkie and said, "Maddie." I am bad luck! Lynn Sr. asked. (looks at Lincoln with a smile and puts a hand on his shoulder) "All of us. loud. We were given the room." Those words just made Lynn Sr. and Rita feel even more lousy and know for certain that they messed up big time. The Loud House Re-write #1-No Such Luck Add to Favourites By jgodzilla1212 Watch Published: May 10, 2020 75 Favourites 101 Comments 31K Views (It begins right after Lincoln tells Lily why he can't attend to Lily's play date and he bumps into Lisa) Lisa: >scoffing< Pshaw, There's no such thing as bad luck, there's only science, all else is hooey. "So just so you can remember clearly," Lincoln started with, before he and his sisters got red in the face, "WE HATE YOU!" Rusty has his own ritual before he plays with us. You're all insane!!! I-, Lincoln: "LYNN!" While we do so, sit on the couch and DON'T MOVE!" But right now, no! Lynn Sr.: But son..if you wanted time off, all you had to do was just say so! THAT THING IS AS HIDEOUS AS YOU!" Lincoln: You are a stupid bully, a coward, a nobody, a freak, a lamebrain, a beast and the worst sister ever AND THAT'S THAT!!!! No Such Luck - Lucky Carol by TriassicLane Cartoons Comics Funny Comics Loud House Rule 34 The Loud House Lincoln The Loud House Fanart Loud House Characters Funny Comic Strips Movies Coming Out Sonic And Amy More information . He really doesn't like us at all does he? Im melting! Lynn: HUH!?!?! We need to follow them, they have to be Lincoln's! I certainly am not! Lucy: Gasp! The parents were shown to be hypocritical at the end, telling their children to behave when they cause the whole family to be kicked out and then tricking them into going to Aunt Ruth's and letting them have a nice weekend at a homemade spa (yes I'm aware the Aunt Ruth thing happens more or less unintentionally but come on, it doesn't really make a massive difference). Takes place in the middle of the events of the infamous episode No Such Luck. Except for Lynn). ", Lincoln: "I know how much you guys like having me there for you, and I didn't want to upset or disappoint you. Then, he opened it up. (Lincoln, without hesitation, hugs her, with the rest of the sisters joining in for another group hug. Mentioning their Aunt Ruth's bunions caused the siblings to gag, before returning back to normal and glaring at their parents. ", Lincoln: "Well Luna, we all make mistakes. NOTE: I apologise to those who hate NSL fics, but ive really wanted to get this off my chest. Honestly, while Rita still a little sad that her dear aunt disowned her and her family, she thought it was for the best, if Ruth felt it was right to call her children monsters then that wasn't someone she wanted her family to be around. "Which room number is it?" She hoped the kids would say something, but all they got were grunts of disbelief. I hate softball! 2 months had come and gone and the parents were no longer grounded. I don't need you chumps at my stupid games! 2022 - 2023 Add to Favourites Comment After a few seconds, the same pounding noise was heard yet again, this time even louder. Scared as to what will happen if they say something wrong, eventually, Lincoln stepped forward and proceeded to say, "We're really sorry, sir. The family and Bobby are there to support Lynn. I can't even begin to imagine what they'll do their parents when they find them.'. ", Lincoln: "Oh, and I'm sorry for breaking your golf clubs, Lori. Post-Story Notice: Anyway. He had a glare on his face and he was tapping his foot on the ground repetitively, showing that he was serious. The squirrel mascot is dancing a little less energetic than usual. I hope you enjoy, please try to be as gentle yet honest as possible as to what you think about the story (this is my first fanfiction in general). "Yeah, brah." Leni: Linky, if you didnt want to come to my fashion show, you just had to say so! He managed to, but with a twist. Now we've broken the shower." Lynn: *Gasp* NOOOOOO!!!!! I plan to do some more humorous parodies and some other stories that aren't going to be as serious as this one, so be on the lookout for that. (continues to cry. When the officer entered the room, he was shocked at what he saw. An alternate ending to Underratedheros story, "Requiem For A Loud". Lincoln said, as tears started forming in his eyes. I hate clowning! Everyone in the room went silent, stood still, afraid to make a move or a noise. ", Lincoln: "Lynn, don't say that. I hate that you put your own lame pride and wants above everything else! Let me tell you this! ", Lincoln: (to his parents) "What kind of parents lock their own child out? I messed up and maybe i did want to support some of you guys! "No," Lucy, the goth said, "Since you don't want us to be here, you can go up to the room and pack everything by yourselves." the family opens the door to see a ticked off Lincoln. After he said that, he finally saw his kids' faces and immediately started backing away, but the kids stomped forward, towards him and Rita and they completely surrounded them. Slamming the sliding glass door shut, he turned around and glared at everyone in the room. ", Lori: (with a broken voice) "What kind of monsters are we?!". You love baseball. Years after his death, Lincoln is given the opportunity to see how his sisters are doing. Sell custom creations to people who love your style. That..That's not true. Lori: Is that literally what you think we are.? But i didnt expect to be ejected from the house and lose everything i had! You can't ground us, we're the parents!" NOTHING!! Thats what my problem is! They messed up and their children were furious with them because of it. Lana: Gee. They were my favourite! And Lori and Lisa. Lincoln asked his parents. kamenrider. CircularBoat742 19 March 2017 User blog:CircularBoat742. Fortunately, there was no earthquake. @JackLeighton19 Idea on How to End This Story: Employee: (Grunts) That's it! Lisa responded with in her genius talk. I'll keep it between the both of us. Note: The reason why I am doing this is because I hate No Such Luck, however I hate most of The No Such Luck fanfictions as well. (Lynn stops) "I forgive you. Everyone awed over this.] Literature. It was against the law. Lynn: Stop being such a baby and just put that suit back on! You're nothing, but an embarrassment to sports. (turns his attention to Luna) "Luna, remember when we went to that SMOOCH concert? They were thinking that they should've told their kids no and that they were going to stay at Aunt Ruth's for the weekend. Her son said, "You and dad told us to behave ourselves and grounded us when we didn't, which we understand, but the fact that you said all that and decided your own advice was pointless! After she did, Leni didn't get angry, but she did get upset, very upset at her parents. Just a heads up, there are moments of severe anger and shouting, so if you don't like either of these then I'd recommend reading something else. Fanfiction - No Such Luck Extention. WE'RE BRUTES!!! The woman groaned and responded with, "It's not so much the dip that got them in trouble, rather it was their lack of swimwear that did." He just looks away as he enters the police car, and is driven away to jail. (They arrive home. (Meanwhile, back on the beach, the family has gathered together, feeling very ashamed and humiliated. I'll just play softball all by myself! ", Lynn: (smiles, more tears come down her eyes,) "What did I do to deserve a brother like you?" Lucy. (Lincoln picks up the head and jumps up and down on it several times.). It's not me who's the problem, it's you and your stubborn nature. Lisa: (sighs in humiliation) Me neither..falling for some dumb superstition, despite always taking pride in science and not curses!! I hate that you made me feel like an outcast! Lincoln: Happy Valentines Day, Ronnie Anne. And I HATE LEECHES!" ENOUGH!!! I was being a sore loser! it is true that the Duke's actions were noble and his heart was stout, but he held doubts of his. He briefly looks at the family photo, beginning to cry. Lori yelled. I'll never be able to play games the best way again! My team needs that! Lincoln: I said NO! (Lincoln picks up the remains of the squirrel suit, blows a spiteful raspberry to the family and runs off in fury and sorrow. She opens it, revealing all of the siblings' love interests.] Lincoln and Lucy hung their heads in shame and embarrassment. (pauses for a few seconds) "Do you guys notlove me anymore? (They enter the house, but Lincoln is nowhere to be seen.). Things were destroyed or damaged and they saw some people getting tended to for bruises. I'M A STUPID, SENSELESS BULLY!!! Hope you enjoy. Share your thoughts, experiences and the tales behind the art. I can't let those crazy beasts see me! (He gathers up a sleeping bag, pillow and snacks. Lana: You know, all of a sudden, I really hate myself! SQUIRRELS WIN!" "Aunt Ruth," Rita said, trying to stop the kids from doing something they'd regret, "hang up the phone." Just a heads up, this ending is going to feature a lot of yelling from the siblings and behavior/actions that some of you may believe that I'm representing the siblings in a bad light. I kinda have mixed feelings on this alternate ending, though Im leaning more on the approval side. (They smile, Rita comes over to hug him and rest of them except Lynnjoin in for a group hug. Honest! Lori: "The bigger question is, how did you get inside? I got to find somewhere to hide! (Cries) All my precious tiaras. "They have a point there honey," Lynn Sr. said, before immediately clasping his mouth shut, his wife glaring at him for saying that. What if one of the neighbours saw Lincoln when he was sleeping outside and called the police? showing a flashback of the episode No Such Luck. We feel so ashamed! Lincoln: I said NO! Im sick of everything thats happened to me! Sell custom creations to people who love your style. I would feel awful if you did. Inspiration for this fanfiction comes from few positive predictions for No Such Luck. As she pondered what he meant, she felt the room shake. You just mess up everything! ], Baseball Announcer: "It's goingit's goingIT'S GONE!!! NOTE: I am aware this episode has been overly bashed to death. Two of Lincoln's comics have references on them: The one he reads first has Mr. He even then flips over and smashes the trophy case. NO!" ", Baseball Announcer: "Just look at our poor squirrels! I thought you were my family! Instead he found comfort in being hugged by Leni, glaring at her parents as she did so. Ruth shouted at the top of her lungs. This shocked Rita, she thought Ruth enjoyed seeing her family. Can you check on the computer and see who's staying in this room." (They pile into Vanzilla and go searching for him). They knew they not only had the bill from the hotel to worry about, but also the possibility of getting sued. Who do you think you are, calling us names and insulting us like that!? Lincoln: No! Anyway, as the title suggests, this is an alternate ending fanfic for Loud House Season 2 episode "Suite and Sour." I HATE THIS!!! Luna, Luan, Lola and Lisa were battling off against three obnoxious hotel guests that made all of them look like saints. I'm giving it a Teen rating, because while there is no serious violence in this story, there are still some moments that might not be comfortable for youngsters to have to read (primarily shouting and lots of it). MLP - Twilight Sparkle, Applejack and Pinkie. Okay this episode has already been hated enough you can pretty much type in the rants for 'No such luck' and there will be a lot of those, I too hated this e. I do not own The Loud House, it belongs to Nickelodeon Animation, created by Chris Savino. You're supposed to be grounded to the hotel room, remember?" Especially with the ending, so I created this story to give it a better ending. INT-LOUD HOUSE-LINCOLN'S ROOM (Lincoln and Lucy have just finished reading the new homemade comic that she made for him.) ", Lola:[to the mascot] "Um, do you mind, fur ball? In order for him to not have "bad luck", his sisters forced him to wear a squirrel suit from Lynn's baseball game. Theres no need to shout. ), Lynn: (Screams in despair) ROASTED, BEATEN, VERBALLY THRASHED AND TOSSED INTO THE SEA BY MY ONLY BROTHER!!!! We are no longer grounded to the room. Start talking. They knew that whatever they were going to tell Aunt Ruth, it wasn't going to be good. Everyone turned to the doorway and saw the Loud kids standing there, red with rage and ready to destroy. *Sniff* No more clothes making for at least a week. Lola added, shouting. Luan brought it. (Shouts) Put the head back on before we get stung by a jellyfish! All rights belong to Nickelodeon. And after that, the whole room was silent. (he goes to the living room window. And even if you don't always succeed, your a good at it. UPDATE: 20/04/2018- the next chapter has been written I just need to correct some thing's from this chapter. "Now I want an explanation," the man started with, as he stomps a few steps toward them, "As to all of this. "And we're glad they did," Lisa added, "Because thanks to the man that stopped by as well as a woman at the front desk, we were able to learn that you and dad apparently couldn't keep your own promise." [The crowd cheers, the Loud family gasps in shock] Lynn: "No! "WELL, NOW THAT I KNOW HOW YOU KIDS FEEL ABOUT ME! "But you know what's even more lousy than that?" If you dont want to wear the squirrel costume, dont wear it. Project Loud House; Ties That Bind; It's a Loud, Loud, Loud, Loud, House; Toads and Tiaras; . Maddie herself hid underneath the desk and she could hear the sounds of things being tossed and breaking or getting smashed on and breaking. Whats next? I only own this fanfiction story, which is rated K+, so enjoy. I hate pageants! Lola: *Gasp* My lovely car! AND I'M GOING TO GET A RESTRAINING ORDER JUST TO KEEP YOU AWAY!" Lincoln: Now THAT'S bad luck for you, you brainless nitwits!! It was never fun but I'm glad it's over." Lincoln and Lucy were dealing with a fictional ghost. # 17. the loud kamen rider by Dratinibro. Luna: We dont go to everybodys events all the time bro! Now, let me make this clear! Especially Lynn. SO I DEMAND AN EXPLANATION!" "Lynn," Rita said, as she rose her head to meet with his, "Be honest with me, do you think we can earn our kids' trust back?" Look, I see sweaty footprints! Bad luck never happened before when he was there..but he said all we do is just mess things up..we really are the worst family ever Rita: We're sorry kids. It's my first ever one shot I've done. He crawls over to the kitchen sink and drinks deeply.). i certainly didn't expect something like that, but i guess curiosity must be fed. This is a family moment. There's no need to shout. (Tugs at it), (They tug and pull while the rest of the family backs away nervously). Sighing, Rita turns to her children and said, "Look I know Aunt Ruth isn't your favorite relative" She was interrupted by Lynn Jr. saying, "That's the understatement of the century." Trying explaining that!" Lana: (sniffles) Butthese were all our pride and joy! HATE ME FOREVER!!! The last one he is shown reading has the Ninja Steel Rangers from Power Rangers Ninja Steel on the cover. Rita: Sweetie, calm down. See if I care! I ADMIT IT!!! I do it almost everyday, and it'snot that I hate going to them or don't want to support you, butsometimes, I wanted to take a break form all that, you know,unwind. Rita asked. "Lori!," Lynn Sr. yelled, "You should better then to stop suddenly in traffic!" And if you do, I'll have you arrested! Tell the community what's on your mind. You all are really, really bad luck! ), Lincoln: But you know what!? Luna: [Blushes] Really? ", Pep:[downright bored] "I think I've wasted my life. Lincoln: If superstitions and their own needs are all they want, I just won't be near them. She started pacing the room, or more specifically around the couch. Luna blushed. She smiled as Lincoln took it. Lincoln: (marches up to Lynn) Straight from you, you big bully! Things were starting to get intense in the Loud family hotel room. Looking at her parents in shock, she said, "You got us kicked out because you decided to go skinny dipping?" No Such Luck, No Such Love is a The Loud House fanfic written by SpartanXHunterX which can be read here. But Lynn Jr. yelled, "SIT DOWN!" Lynn sat next to her and wrapped his arm around her shoulder, in an attempt to comfort her. "And just remember," Lori said, and then she and her siblings yelled one last time, "WE HATE YOU!" He gives her bat a furious glare, smashes it in half and throws it out the window.
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